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::Flowing up:: by Fierying

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First of all, i really like this. a lot. The shading and lineart is amazing, and the background is beautiful too. I love the colouring of the eyes, and it automatically kinda.. drags me towards it I guess? c:

But two things that bug me is the fact that the bag looks completely unaffected by gravity, and parts of the hair too. maybe if the bag had a strap across the waste to keep it in its' position? i don't know. that's the only part that makes my ocd.. "bitch" i guess. ;n; IMSORRYIFTHISOFFENDEDYOUORANYTHINGOK :c its not meant to! I really like this art piece but you asked for critique.. so I gave it I guess. ;u; .. thank you for reading! LOL ;;
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